The trouble comes when the analysis of those phials does not confirm rude health, but points out problems. The blood tests then take on an entirely different complexion.
It was a visit to the nurse in our local practice that concentrated my mind on a forthcoming blood test and this poem is the result.
I would not want to give the wrong impression: I feel and am feeling fine and I think that the feeling at the end of the poem could be something about which we need to think at any time in our lives - not just when there is a looming blood test!
Blood
Red.
Startling.
It
always
looks the same. Each
time
I see it fill a tube.
And
silent, telling nothing
to the naked eye, and yet
it’s eloquent enough to
fill a page with printed
numbers – some with asterisks.
That is the underside,
the hidden themes
within the garish
oxygen-puffed
corpuscles.
Which way the story goes,
to tragedy or comedy or farce,
is not yet settled.
Anti-climax is my choice:
a trite and tired soap,
where daily nothingness
leads unexceptionally
towards an easy,
distant, end!
I am beginning to think that there is a sort of 'look' to my poems that this one exemplifies: short, irregular stanzas with a few separated words and extra spaces with a reliance on the comma to keep the rhythm together!
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