Thursday 16 April 2015

Some love

Although this was not really part of the prompt, this poem came from a freewrite as part of the evening with the Barcelona Poetry Group.
          I am not sure that this is going to be the final state of this poem, but I think that it does say something about missed opportunities, and what is lost through a sort of emotional cowardice!


Some love



Some love beats blood past
broken brain-bonds, through
intermittent jangling nerves
that jitter thought to finger tips –
which almost bridge; but stop,
before they realise
what they can’t take:

a touching, real and tangible
which tears chasms apart
and closes tightly-in together.


A short poem, but one which has some authentic emotion for me!

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