Saturday 21 February 2015

Justified ire

I'm not sure that this poem stands by itself, but it certainly forms part of a growing sequence which centres on my swimming.


Justified ire




Rough beard and garish briefs
do not a swimmer make!
His hairy chest and
yawing crawl, with feet
and legs awry and
clumsy stroke which
splashed and dragged
redundant spray –
inelegant
and, unrefined!

And he left me behind.

With ease.  
          
          Even with board
between his legs,
to work the arms,
I could not match his speed.

And did he even know
it was a race?

I tell myself, 
          though slower,
I’m the one with, ‘style’.

I would though,
wouldn’t I?




Another poem, just like the rest, that needs to be set aside for consideration at a later date.

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