Saturday 28 February 2015

Remains

I continue to feel a real sense of loss at the departure of the 20 trees that were in the car park of my local swimming pool.  I wrote a poem a couple of days ago about my first reaction in 'Gone' and thought that would be it.  But it isn't.
          I think part of my resentment is based on the fact that not only have they cut down all those trees, but also the car park is going to be closed for the next month at least while they do something or other to it.  Parking is not easy in this area and the loss of the car park makes the situation very much worse.  So bad indeed that I may have to bring my bike out of retirement!  Now that is something.
          So, no trees and I will have to make an extra effort to go for my daily swim!  Such emotions are well worth an extra poem.  Which is what follows.
          I am bemused by the fact that, with the size of the lorry that they had, they have been unable to take away all the vegetation and some is left looking like bonfires waiting for the match!  There is also a certain amount of peripheral discusion/work/consultation going on and an amazing ballet of now-you-see-them-now-you-don't with the workers themselves.
          I hate the fact that the trees have gone and I feel that the ecology of the area of the centre has already been changed.  As I say in the poem,
Earth newly turned,
wind dries to dust,
already blown, unhindered,
through the empty space
It's as though I can see a new Dust Bowl being created in local centre before my very eyes!
          I felt that there was something very modern about seeing one workman on his phone with his back to the 'fresh, dead wood' and for a moment I saw a sort of television report of an incident where most of the action was concerned with media reporting the incident than the incident itself.  We live in a world where the selfie is seen an ordinary affirmation of reality rather than a very odd take on it indeed!  A sort of concept where nothing is real until you have taken a photo of it and put it all on social media.
          Anyway, all these ideas were in my head when I wrote this.  And I have an uneasy feeling that this latest addition to the 'Winter trees' sequence on this particular aspect will not be the last!



Winter trees

iii.     Remains                     



Earth newly turned,
wind dries to dust,
already blown, unhindered,
through the empty space
that once was filled
by what’s been cut away.

Some debris stubbornly remains
in incoherent heaps like
smashed, discarded toys,
with odd appendages
still reaching out,
untwitching,
in uneasy air.

The men who dug
are all engaged
in other tasks
around the edge
of that new waste.

One’s turned his back
on fresh, dead wood,
and on his phone
completes a modern scene
by foregrounding Facebook
and dancing thumbs.

While what is real   
lies just beyond the screen
soon to be cleared.




As I said with 'Gone' I am not sure that the numbers will remain the same when the sequence is edited and finished, but this is work in progress and it will do for now.


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